In Te Ngahere, we have been writing a script for our advertisement to sell our technology shelf that our group made.
We are doing a script because we are trying to persuade someone to buy our shelf.
I enjoyed writing the script because it will be really cool if we sell it.
I think I could do better by making my script just a little bit better by adding powerful words in.
I think I did well by putting in great questions.
Kia ora John I really like your technology script. like how you explained what you did. I also like how your wrote that you are trying to persuade someone to buy your product. Keep up the good work.
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